Felisha Critique
This looks like a fun way to relay the message of how to make the future less polluted! I really like the concept rough on the left (that looks like a board game). It really lets me visualize how I can help make the world more beautiful and clean. I like how the heading is the pollution and the little pictures of cars that get less and less used. I also am impressed with how much information you are putting into it, but it is organized so that it doesn’t seem like overload. I really like to call to action that you wrote at the bottom. Will that be on the poster? I think it would be good to have as a sub-heading or something (“what our future can be if we start changing now!”) Also if you’re going for a board game motif it might be fun to make the road into squares that have steps in which we can make a difference instead of just having them floating around the road. Overall I think it is a strong concept to compare cleaning the earth to a game. Maybe it will make more people want to do it!
My Response to Felisha's Critique
Thanks! I totally agree with you, the sketch on the left is much better. I thought about making the road into board game squares..but I'm still not sure how I feel about it. I'll play with the idea. I wasn't planning on including the text on the bottom of the sketch into the poster, but maybe I should. Including a call to action at the bottom is a great idea. Thanks for the feedback!!
Re-Do Sketches
Final Sketch
Comp #1 / Work-In-Progres
Tight Comp #2
Final Piece
